Huh??? Wow That's a stretch and a half.
Most of that is so absurd I wouldn't know where to begin to discuss it. Just trust that it is made up of whole cloth and not even based on Mormon theology. they only piece that I can discuss is the verse that forbids adding to or taking away from the book in Revelations 22. The book of Revelations was written by John while in captivity on the Isle of Patmos. It referred only to that revelation. The Bible was not compiled with Revelation as the last book until several centuries later. Incidentally there is a similar verse in Deuteronomy. Shall we assume that anything written after that is invalid?