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Monday, January 19, 2009
Bill Steigerwald :: Townhall.com Columnist
Ted Sorensen offers Obama advice
by Bill Steigerwald
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Ted Sorensen will be paying special attention to Barack Obama's inaugural address on Tuesday. One of the last surviving insiders from John F. Kennedy's administration, Sorensen, 80, was JFK's legal counsel and primary speechwriter and played a major part in crafting Kennedy's oft-quoted and much-praised 1961 inaugural address.

While Kennedy himself came up with the most-famous line (albeit cribbed from history) -- "Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country" -- it was Sorensen's words and rhetoric that made up the flesh and bones of Kennedy's speeches and writings from 1953 to 1963 (including the 1956 book "Profiles in Courage"). Sorensen's candid 2008 autobiography, "Counselor: A Life at the Edge of History" (Harper), includes an often critical account of the time he served Kennedy. I talked to Sorensen Thursday by telephone from his office in New York City:

Q: If you were Mr. Obama's chief speechwriter, what would be the first bit of advice you'd give him?

A: My advice would be what it should not be. No. 1, it should not be a campaign speech. He should not attack the Republican Party or even George W. Bush. No. 2, it should not be a State of the Union message with a laundry list of legislative proposals. No. 3, it should focus primarily on his global audience, because the American people already know Obama and what he's like and what he stands for. The rest of the world is very interested but up to now they have only indirect words about him. This is his chance to stamp his identity on global thinking for the next four years.

Q: Would this be all-purpose advice for any inaugural or just for Obama?

A: Well, yes, I think I would say the same thing to anybody who I thought was capable of living up to it, and he clearly is; he's a naturally eloquent man.

Q: What is the main purpose of the inaugural address?

A: The main purpose should be to set the tone and the theme of the next four years.

Q: Has that purpose changed since 1961?

A: Well of course when Kennedy was inaugurated, it was the height of the Cold War with the Soviet Union and that necessarily had to be the context in which he spoke. But Kennedy and Obama both stood for hope and change, for young enthusiasm and idealism, so there are some similarities there and I think this will probably be the best inaugural address since Kennedy's.

Q: Kennedy's inaugural is usually ranked in the top one, two, three or four addresses.

A: That's exactly right. Lincoln's second was the best. Jefferson's first was good and Roosevelt's first was good. Some say that Roosevelt's second and Lincoln's first were also right up there, but those I remember less well.

Q: When we say JFK's address was good, what do we mean -- the rhetoric, the ideas?

A: We mean both. I think JFK's talk was exceptional for the strength of its ideas beautifully articulated. Maybe strike the word "beautifully" and say "nobly."

Q: Are you always editing yourself?

A: Yes (laughs).

Q: What is your favorite line or idea from JFK's inaugural?

A: There are a lot of lines competing for that honor. One of the most important, which has been sadly forgotten, was his line, "So let us begin anew -- remembering on both sides that civility is not a sign of weakness ."

Q: Is there an idea or line or message in JFK's address that you wished history had paid more attention to or emphasized more than the ones we do know?

A: Well, there are several of those, too. For example, after he says the "Ask not" line, the next line says, "Fellow citizens of the world, ask not what America can do for you but what together we can do for the freedom of man." Well, think about that salutation -- "fellow citizens of the world." That means he's saying I'm a citizen of the world. Nobody noticed that.

Q: Can you clear up the provenance of that famous line, "Ask not what your country can do for you"?

A: (The phone line goes dead and we're disconnected for several minutes.) Alright, so modern communications aren't what they're cracked up to be. What I'm saying is that of course I was involved, as I had been involved for four years with JFK's writings and speeches. But he was very heavily involved himself. He wouldn't just take something I would work on and get up and give it without changing it.

Q: And that "Ask not" line?

A: Yes, there are a lot of people who claim that it was said first by Oliver Wendell Holmes or Warren G. Harding or the headmaster at Choate. The furthest reach of all was Kahlil Gibran (who wrote "The Prophet" in 1923) who wrote something like it back in the '20s. As I say in the book, the Gibran Society wrote me and said while it's true that that particular work of Gibran's had not been translated into English until long after the Kennedy inaugural, was it possible that either Kennedy or I could read Persian or Arabic and that's where we got it? I had to say, "No."

Q: When Milton Friedman wrote his book "Capitalism and Freedom" in 1962, he opened the book with JFK's "Ask not" line and he critiqued it strongly because he said it was putting the state above the individual. Did you ever hear that criticism and if so what would your response be to that?

A: "What you can do for your country" doesn't mean the government, it means your fellow human beings. Kennedy often said that public service includes helping the Red Cross, and the Boy Scouts, and your local hospital and school. It's not putting the state over the individual.

Q: Is there a great line from a political speech that you wish you had written? One that you go around saying, "Man, I wish I had pulled that one off. That's one of the greatest lines of all time"?

A: Well, I think there have been some great speeches in my time, including Martin Luther King's "I Have a Dream" speech in 1963, but I don't know of any better speech or more quotable speech than Abraham Lincoln in his second inaugural and in his Gettysburg Address. As far as I'm concerned, Milton Friedman or not, "Of the people, by the people, for the people" is still the best definition of democracy there is.

Q: How do you describe yourself politically?

A: I'm a liberal, I should say a liberal Democrat . I'm still self-editing (laughs).

Q: Have your politics changed in any significant way since your JFK days?

A: No. Again, please read the book "Counselor." It's available at Amazon.com and local bookstores. In the one-third of the book about my years after Kennedy, I stressed that my views had not changed, even though a lot of other people's have. Once when I needled my friend Pat Moynihan, a good fellow, a little bit about some of his slippage in views, he said, "Why, Ted, you sound like a 1960s liberal." And I thought to myself, "Yes, I still am a 1960s liberal."

I also quoted in the book that when the FBI did its first field search on me when I was first applying for a lowly job in the federal government after I graduated from law school, one of my law school classmates said in answer to the FBI questions -- I know this because this appeared in the report, when I got my FBI file -- "Ted's real liberal, but he's a loyal American." As I said in the book, and as I say now, "I'll take that verdict on both counts."

Q: You feel comfortable with today's Democratic Party and you believe JFK would as well?

A: Yes. Oh, there are always going to be Democrats who didn't think JFK was not liberal enough, aggressive enough, or that Kennedy should have spent more money on this or that. He was actually a fiscal conservative and I worked with him on that. Part of my responsibility was to keep the budget below $100 billion. Now they're up there in the trillions.

Q: Do you have any claim on the Kennedy line, "A rising tide lifts all boats"?

A: No. That came from a business group -- although I have to admit I stole it from them and had something to do with passing it on to JFK. That was the slogan of the New England Council, which was like a regional chamber of commerce. Their slogan was, "A rising tide lifts all the boats."

Q: Which is a wonderful metaphor.

A: It is. I like it.

Q: When you write a speech do you write it for the eye or the ear?

A: Both. You've got to remember the ear, because that's how it's going to first be received by the immediate audience in the room and if it has words that are difficult to pronounce, or understand, or distinguish from the word before or the word after, it can diminish the impact of the speech. Of course I am writing for the eye because of the way a speech is reported in the press. I think everyone writes for the eye. But for a good speech, some sense of the poetic is important and poems are clearly written totally for the ear.

Q: Is there a line or two or a big thought or a timeless theme that you'd insert into Mr. Obama's speech if you had the chance?

A: If he asks me, I will give him some suggestions for his ear only and I think I won't do it through the Pittsburgh press.

Q: If you were writing a speech for Mr. Obama, is there a trick you'd want to pull out of the Ted Sorensen speechwriting playbook that would fit Obama's speaking style and oratorical skills perfectly?

A: I don't have tricks in a playbook, but I think it's going to be a great speech and it's going to emphasize the need for a more peaceful world and a more united country in which we can restore confidence in our leadership and our economy.

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Bill Steigerwald, born and raised in Pittsburgh, is a former L.A. Times copy editor and free-lancer who also worked as a docudrama researcher for CBS-TV in Hollywood before becoming a reporter for the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette and a columnist Pittsburgh Tribune-Review. Bill Steigerwald recently retired from daily newspaper journalism..
 
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Google offers Conservatives advice...
The second inaugural from Lincoln is the best...There's a BIG gap between that one and whoever's #2...I would encourage all of the "Social Conservatives" to google "Lincoln Second Inaugural"...Lincoln speaks of "Christians" who claim the "same god" while being on opposite sides of War...It's a testament to the idea that man does not know the will of god. Lincoln remarked that men miss the mark by claiming the mantel of "god's will" through their own self-rightousness (example: slavery).....On a more broad note; reading early Presidential inaugural addresses will yield confirmation about how Christianity is so much a part of our history. FDR references casting out the "money changers" in hist first inaugural (I don't think we'll hear the phrase "money changers" tomorrow).."Christianity" was the common flag carried by both the Union and Confederate armies.

Ted Sorensen offers help for insomniacs.
Read this column. Thanks Ted! Just did a face plant on the old keyboard! Gee, did anyone notice what the holiday was today ? Now, MLK is a 40+ year old subject that still stirs the soul.

Oh well, maybe on his "Golden 81st" someone will talk about him...

Christianity is the elephant in the room
Obama has requested to use the Lincoln bible for his oath of office, just the second time it has been used for that purpose. And this from a man who accused the masses of "clinging to their guns and their religion."

Christianity claims a seat at the head of every table in American politics, and usually gets it even though it isn't really theirs. Few of the founders were Christians. Jefferson, for one, was a deist and did not believe in the trinity nor in the divinity of Christ.

On the other hand, phrases such as "In God we trust", "under God", and "so help me God" (which Obama will append to his oath just like all those who preceeded him) have been with us from the beginning and are not going away any time soon.

We have reached the point where religion in general, and Christianity in particular, is tolerated in this country without being taken too seriously. Obama is looking for a D.C. church to attend that his presence won't disrupt too much. But he's doing it mostly for his image and for his kids. Nobody wants to raise their kids as athiests. Let them make that decision for themselves later in life.

But one thing's for sure. Neither Obama nor any other president in recent history, except for George W. Bush, really believes that God is on our side.

JFK's shadow still casts long and wide..
Sorensen was often called Kennedy's shadow identity, because of his admitted influence in Kennedy's speeches and quotes. JFK's words still resonant today, and it's interesting and ironic how much of today's political and ideological climate is eerily similar to that of the early Sixties - much has certainly changed, but much remains the same. Kennedy was an inspirational leader lost too soon to the annals of history. Sorensen was often his alter ego, and his conscience, as well as his speech writer. Obama should not brashly attempt to co-opt Camelot, but he would do well to understand what made that moment in time so hopeful and unique for so many people.

Limitation of Rhetoric
Rhetoric doesn't cut it as far as a President's actual policy. JFK's rhetoric soared but remember, he got us into Vietnam and then almost got us killed during the Cuban missile crisis. I remember JFK because of all the bimbos he had during his term in office. Of course, Bill Clinton considered him a role model as far as extra curricula activities are concerned.

I like Calvin Coolidge's very cool, un-soaring statement: "The business of America is business."

Rhetoric solves nothing and totalitarians sneer at American presidents' hyperbole in inauguration addresses. Power, and the use of, remains the common currency of geopolitics and that is not going to change in our lifetimes.

WE Shall Overcome
Barack Obama's Election Has Re-Energized Pro-Life Advocates to Fight Abortion
http://www.lifenews.com/nat4739.html

Sadly
ask what you can do for your country has become tell what your country can do for you so we can continue to buy your vote.

Ted Sorensen, yeah right!
He is a perfect example of ....,with age does NOT come wisdom.

Open invite
Open invitation to a great conservative blog website where honest debates on the issues is always welcomed. Stop by for a visit and sit a spell. It is my favorite conservative site and we are generally civil and respectfully to one another opinions and enjoy civil debates on all the current issues. The web address is http://noleftturnz.wordpress.com/
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